"Jacob!" Ethel yelled, then she looked up the road to make sure Oteka wasn’t there. "Ethel!" Jacob yelled running into her arms. They embraced each other with tears rolling down both of there cheeks. Then Jacob asked the dreadful question, " Where is my father." Then Ethel said nothing and started balling, " What is wrong," asked Jacob! " Well" answered Ethel with a look of sorrow on her face, "Um...well your father was driving home one day from work and well he side swiped another car and flipped the car over and broke his neck and it was to late." " What are you saying, my father is dead" said Jacob with a disturbed look on his face. Then when Ethel nodded her head Jacob dropped to his knees and cried. As Ethel rocked him on the porch of the house she sang him a lullaby. All Jacob could say was " I have no family and I have lived a life of hell please help me god." Then there was a sound coming from the bushes and Jacob and Ethel sat up and where ready to run when Hannah walked towards them and flopped on the ground like a fish out of water. Jacob ran over to Hannah and they hugged each other. For the next ten minuets that is all they could do.
Ian's Better Ian
Mac's Better Ending
Better Ending
Brooke
"Jacob!" Ethel yelled, then she looked up the road to make sure Oteka wasn’t there. "Ethel!" Jacob yelled running into her arms. They embraced each other with tears rolling down both of there cheeks. Then Jacob asked the dreadful question, " Where is my father." Then Ethel said nothing and started balling, " What is wrong," asked Jacob! " Well" answered Ethel with a look of sorrow on her face, "Um...well your father was driving home one day from work and well he side swiped another car and flipped the car over and broke his neck and it was to late." " What are you saying, my father is dead" said Jacob with a disturbed look on his face. Then when Ethel nodded her head Jacob dropped to his knees and cried. As Ethel rocked him on the porch of the house she sang him a lullaby. All Jacob could say was " I have no family and I have lived a life of hell please help me god." Then there was a sound coming from the bushes and Jacob and Ethel sat up and where ready to run when Hannah walked towards them and flopped on the ground like a fish out of water. Jacob ran over to Hannah and they hugged each other. For the next ten minuets that is all they could do.